that was fantastic and wonderful and I couldn't put it down. I loved how real you made them all seem and how you wove Sean into the story but despite he being essentially a side character for the purpose of the storyline he felt wonderfully well rounded and whole.
your polling worked well too - I could really feel the characters falling in love as if that's exactly how it should have happened. it didn't feel rushed but neither did it feel like it was being drawn out. all in all the perfect length and a perfect story.
hope you write more of this pairing soon. x javana
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on 2013-10-21 04:00 am (UTC)your polling worked well too - I could really feel the characters falling in love as if that's exactly how it should have happened. it didn't feel rushed but neither did it feel like it was being drawn out. all in all the perfect length and a perfect story.
hope you write more of this pairing soon. x javana